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michaelpatrick Aqualad

Joined: 31 Jan 2006 Posts: 11
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 9:18 pm Post subject: Victor Starr |
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Here is a sketch of the main character of a comic I'm hoping to bring to life this year.
Web comics are notoriously lacking superhero comics, but Butterfly is showing me that they CAN work on the web. This is an idea that has kicked around in my head in one form or another for years and I have to let it out. _________________ Hey, I draw sometimes! |
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deantrippe Robin

Joined: 04 Mar 2005 Posts: 1199 Location: Georgia
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 10:46 pm Post subject: |
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Cool, dude! I'm all for more superhero comics.
Since this is a crit/comment section of the board, I guess I think maybe you should play with this guy's costume a bit. Obviously I don't know much about the character, but it looks like maybe he could use either a belt, or some pockets, or gloves, or a different color in there somewhere. Just a thought.
Anyway, thanks for helping get this WIP section going, man. We've been wanting to build a cool place for constructive crits for a while.  _________________ Dean Trippe | Project Rooftop |
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michaelpatrick Aqualad

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Posted: Fri Feb 03, 2006 1:30 am Post subject: |
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I'm open to comments. This character is sort of the low-rent superhero. He doesn't wear much of a costume. There are two other characters who get on his case about it a lot. They try to get him to work the genre a little more. _________________ Hey, I draw sometimes! |
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deantrippe Robin

Joined: 04 Mar 2005 Posts: 1199 Location: Georgia
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Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 9:28 pm Post subject: |
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| michaelpatrick wrote: | | I'm open to comments. This character is sort of the low-rent superhero. He doesn't wear much of a costume. There are two other characters who get on his case about it a lot. They try to get him to work the genre a little more. |
Hahaha, I LOVE that idea. Yeah, in that case, I'd really push towards even less of a costume, more regular clothes. Great concept.  _________________ Dean Trippe | Project Rooftop |
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