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Discount Wisdom, 5 cents!

 
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Pi
Aqualad


Joined: 02 Feb 2006
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Location: Berkeley, CA

PostPosted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 6:41 pm    Post subject: Discount Wisdom, 5 cents! Reply with quote

A commission from a magazine on campus.

First version, they said it was too friendly


Second version


Crits and comments?
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deantrippe
Robin


Joined: 04 Mar 2005
Posts: 1199
Location: Georgia

PostPosted: Fri Feb 24, 2006 11:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

haha, well the revised one certainly isn't 'friendly.'

i think your style seems a bit unpolished. i guess the way to work on that is to really get your pencils as solid as possible before inking. i think maybe a more 'solid' feeling booth would make the dude's craziness more interesting. the only major thing i see in the second one is the '5 cents' bit being kinda unreadable.

anyway, fun stuff. thanks for posting. Smile
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Pi
Aqualad


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PostPosted: Fri Feb 24, 2006 11:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks bunches!

I've been trying to find a definite style for a while, right now I've got sort of a bastardized-American-cartoon thing, but I'd really like to find a good niche that I can settle into. I'll be sure to work my pencils more, thanks again!
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