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tasteslikejim
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 Posted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 11:56 pm Post subject: NEW COMIC GUYZ. |
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It's for the most part done. I have to fix the title page and cover (not shown), plus it looks a million times better printed out.
http://www.tasteslikejim.com/comics/armslength/
Input and constructive crit would be appreciated too, if you're open to it.
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deantrippe
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| Posted: Fri Mar 24, 2006 8:36 am Post subject: |
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holy...
wow.
that's freaking awesome dude.
jeez. uh, the only thing i'd consider changing is taking out the last line. i think the images work great and that last line kinda trambles on them?
jesus dude. thats a GREAT comic.
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tasteslikejim
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| Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 11:09 am Post subject: |
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Hrm, I'll make another version with the last lines omitted. It really does read differently in print, with the flipping of the pages and whatnot. Hey has Joel Priddy talked to you recently by any chance?
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deantrippe
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| Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 4:00 pm Post subject: |
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| tasteslikejim wrote: | | Hrm, I'll make another version with the last lines omitted. It really does read differently in print, with the flipping of the pages and whatnot. Hey has Joel Priddy talked to you recently by any chance? |
i think the story works better without the last line, but it's just my opinion. it's your story bro.
no i haven't talked to joel this week. he's supposedly working on a review of a power pack submission we got at project rooftop. why do you ask? is he missing?
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tasteslikejim
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| Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 4:49 pm Post subject: |
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Well he mentioned your name in class and he said he was maybe talking to you about visiting our class as a guest/working comic artist/illustrator?
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deantrippe
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| Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 5:41 pm Post subject: |
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| tasteslikejim wrote: | | Well he mentioned your name in class and he said he was maybe talking to you about visiting our class as a guest/working comic artist/illustrator? |
this is true!
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Jamie Dee Galey
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| Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 10:18 pm Post subject: |
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| deantrippe wrote: | | tasteslikejim wrote: | | Well he mentioned your name in class and he said he was maybe talking to you about visiting our class as a guest/working comic artist/illustrator? |
this is true! |
As soon as his tags are good!
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deantrippe
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| Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 10:32 pm Post subject: |
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| Jamie Dee Galey wrote: | | deantrippe wrote: | | tasteslikejim wrote: | | Well he mentioned your name in class and he said he was maybe talking to you about visiting our class as a guest/working comic artist/illustrator? |
this is true! |
As soon as his tags are good! |
HA.
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