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michaelpatrick
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Joined: 31 Jan 2006
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 9:18 pm    Post subject: Victor Starr Reply with quote

Here is a sketch of the main character of a comic I'm hoping to bring to life this year.



Web comics are notoriously lacking superhero comics, but Butterfly is showing me that they CAN work on the web. This is an idea that has kicked around in my head in one form or another for years and I have to let it out.
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deantrippe
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 10:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cool, dude! I'm all for more superhero comics.

Since this is a crit/comment section of the board, I guess I think maybe you should play with this guy's costume a bit. Obviously I don't know much about the character, but it looks like maybe he could use either a belt, or some pockets, or gloves, or a different color in there somewhere. Just a thought.

Anyway, thanks for helping get this WIP section going, man. We've been wanting to build a cool place for constructive crits for a while. Smile
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michaelpatrick
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 03, 2006 1:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm open to comments. This character is sort of the low-rent superhero. He doesn't wear much of a costume. There are two other characters who get on his case about it a lot. They try to get him to work the genre a little more.
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 9:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

michaelpatrick wrote:
I'm open to comments. This character is sort of the low-rent superhero. He doesn't wear much of a costume. There are two other characters who get on his case about it a lot. They try to get him to work the genre a little more.

Hahaha, I LOVE that idea. Yeah, in that case, I'd really push towards even less of a costume, more regular clothes. Great concept. Smile
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